Ashes Essay
Xavier Markowitz
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People’s life is affected by other people. In the short story “Ashes” by Susan Beth Pfeffer, Ashes, the main character loves her dad very much. Her dad is very nice to her and he compliments her with every chance he gets. But there is something about him that is not quite right. Even though he is very nice he can let Ashes down sometimes. Her feelings about her father change throughout the story. As this happens, her emotions are expressed through the weather, as a form of symbolism. As Ashes feelings about her father change, her view of the world changes.
Ashes’ father tries to be nice to her every chance he gets. This makes her feel good and this feeling is shown through the weather. He always compliments her and says how nice she looks. He says things like “You look radiant,” and “You could be a model.” He says very kind things to Ashes to make her feel special. At the beginning of the story, when you are just meeting the father character, Ashes says that “every time I saw my father, the sun cast off just a little more warmth than it had the day before.” She is happy when she sees her father and this is expressed through the sun. This symbolism of her emotions makes it easy to see what Ashes is thinking.
Although Ashes’ father can be very nice to her, he always manages to let her down. This feeling toward her father is also shown in the weather. Ashes says that “When she was little, her dad used to promise her the stars as a necklace, but like most promise that one never came true.” This is showing how the dad lets people down by making false promises. At the very end of the book, while she was stealing her moms money, Ashes, “looked out the window and saw only ash gray sky.” This was a day when she was with her father so the day was supposed to be sunny and clear and nice but instead the day was gray and cold. Instead of being nice to her, dad has forced her to make a decision about something that is morally wrong.
Ashes’ life is affected by her father in that the way she feels around her father is expressed through the weather. A person’s life can be affected by other people and this story agrees with that statement. A person’s life usually changes because of other people or because of something another person did. This shows how we can make difference in someone else’s life even if we do not know them very well. We can do this by just being nice to other people and making them feel good.